Composition(20pts): 18 Hints at a foreground, middle, background
Contrast (20pts): 18 Its a pretty subtle piece so far
Center of Interest(20pts): 20 Good placement
Craftsmanship (20pts): 10 -The eye either needs to be drawn or covered up more believably. Upload the new one for a higher grade. I love the technique of the masking fluid and her features, hand, etc., are drawn well.
Creativity (10pts): 8 I think this is good but still not yet clear what you are going for. I think you would benefit greatly from doing a planning page in your sketchbook with color. Not only will it help you visualize what your are saying, it could be used as a concentration piece in itself which I think you need since it is a bit esoteric in meaning. Print your excellent picture of Rainey and walk the viewer through your process with words and/or pictures that answer the questions: why she is posed that way, what you are going for.
Classroom Ethics (10pts): On time, which is good because you can resubmit with tweaks. I like the direction you are going with this, its deep and people will relate to it when you spell it out for them.
Emphasis Variety Balance Repetition Proportion Movement and Rhythm Texture S...
Composition(20pts): 18 Hints at a foreground, middle, background
ReplyDeleteContrast (20pts): 18 Its a pretty subtle piece so far
Center of Interest(20pts): 20 Good placement
Craftsmanship (20pts): 10 -The eye either needs to be drawn or covered up more believably. Upload the new one for a higher grade.
I love the technique of the masking fluid and her features, hand, etc., are drawn well.
Creativity (10pts): 8 I think this is good but still not yet clear what you are going for. I think you would benefit greatly from doing a planning page in your sketchbook with color. Not only will it help you visualize what your are saying, it could be used as a concentration piece in itself which I think you need since it is a bit esoteric in meaning. Print your excellent picture of Rainey and walk the viewer through your process with words and/or pictures that answer the questions: why she is posed that way, what you are going for.
Classroom Ethics (10pts): On time, which is good because you can resubmit with tweaks. I like the direction you are going with this, its deep and people will relate to it when you spell it out for them.