Composition(20pts): 20 Good balance of the foreground, middle, background. The addition of red gives it a good, finished feel. Rule of thirds observed with the eyes looking to the unseen focal point. Contrast (20pts): 20 Good! I can squint and see really dark darks and lights.
Center of Interest(20 pts): 20 We know where to look :)
Craftsmanship (20pts): 18 - super job
Creativity (10pts): 10 Great addition of background elements.
Classroom Ethics (10pts): 10 Excellent!
I really think this piece is a great culmination of your concentrations. Now the trick will be to narrow the focus to a unified ending. I know time is short but you managed to do this very quickly so I think working on this look will be very successful.
Think about narrowing the focus from now on to say one definite thing visually.
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Composition(20pts): 20 Good balance of the foreground, middle, background. The addition of red gives it a good, finished feel. Rule of thirds observed with the eyes looking to the unseen focal point.
ReplyDeleteContrast (20pts): 20 Good! I can squint and see really dark darks and lights.
Center of Interest(20 pts): 20 We know where to look :)
Craftsmanship (20pts): 18 - super job
Creativity (10pts): 10 Great addition of background elements.
Classroom Ethics (10pts): 10 Excellent!
I really think this piece is a great culmination of your concentrations.
Now the trick will be to narrow the focus to a unified ending.
I know time is short but you managed to do this very quickly so I think working on this look will be very successful.
Think about narrowing the focus from now on to say one definite thing visually.
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ReplyDeleteShe does not look elderly by the way. I think you need a really strong statement now.
Go through each one individually and describe it, with sentences or adjectives, and look for similarities afterwards.