Composition(20pts): 15 Good foreground, middle, but no background. I think adding a back wall and adding more horizontal lines all over the whole floor would make a big difference.
Contrast (20pts): 20 Good! I can squint and see really dark darks and lights.
Center of Interest(20 pts): 20 We know where to look :)
Craftsmanship (20pts): 13- likeness, excitement and verve! I think the spaces in between the fingers need to be finished and the area under the arm could have a bit more black like the two knees. Also a pupil on the painted eye should be defined, she looks a bit like she has cataracts with the smokey gray.
Creativity (10pts): 7 I love the feeling and spunk of this piece!
Composition(20pts): 15 Good foreground, middle, but no background. I think adding a back wall and adding more horizontal lines all over the whole floor would make a big difference.
ReplyDeleteContrast (20pts): 20 Good! I can squint and see really dark darks and lights.
Center of Interest(20 pts): 20 We know where to look :)
Craftsmanship (20pts): 13- likeness, excitement and verve!
I think the spaces in between the fingers need to be finished and the area under the arm could have a bit more black like the two knees. Also a pupil on the painted eye should be defined, she looks a bit like she has cataracts with the smokey gray.
Creativity (10pts): 7 I love the feeling and spunk of this piece!
Classroom Ethics (10pts): 10 Excellent!
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Repost with changes and it will go higher.
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