Composition(20pts): 15 Hints at a foreground, middle, background with the dark beyond the head. Good placement of face!
Contrast (20pts): 20 Good! I can squint and see really dark darks.
Center of Interest(20 pts): 20 Good placement of face and one eye.
Craftsmanship (20pts): 10 Good markmaking but incomplete. Its a very good likeness and I really want to see where you go with it. The only shape that is strongly outlined is my right cheek (left hand side to viewer) and the other is not outlined as much. Not evaluating just mentioning since I cant see the finished yet. Background is obviously full of prints and I look forward to seeing what you will do.
Creativity (10pts): 0 I think this one is interesting. This is why I think you excel at woodcut, you think in shapes :) The values are interesting but more pattern like. I cant really grade the creativity until it is finished and I can see where you are going.
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ReplyDeleteComposition(20pts): 15 Hints at a foreground, middle, background
with the dark beyond the head. Good placement of face!
Contrast (20pts): 20 Good! I can squint and see really dark darks.
Center of Interest(20 pts): 20 Good placement of face and one eye.
Craftsmanship (20pts): 10 Good markmaking but incomplete. Its a very
good likeness and I really want to see where you go with it. The only shape that is strongly outlined is my right cheek (left hand side to viewer)
and the other is not outlined as much. Not evaluating just mentioning
since I cant see the finished yet. Background is obviously full of prints
and I look forward to seeing what you will do.
Creativity (10pts): 0 I think this one is interesting. This is why I
think you excel at woodcut, you think in shapes :) The values are interesting but more pattern like. I cant really grade the creativity
until it is finished and I can see where you are going.
Classroom Ethics (10pts):5 unfinished
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